So, here's what I submitted:
I am now twenty-six and planning my wedding to the man of my dreams. While the rest of my wedding is on a budget, I knew wearing a pair of Jimmy Choo’s as I walk down the aisle would be priceless. I am always looking at the Jimmy Choo website to be sure I am up on all the new designs, but for once I got to go on the site to shop. When I saw them, I just knew. They were timeless, elegant, fun, sparkly and black....all the things I wanted in my wedding shoes!
My mom and I went to get my dream shoes, but unfortunately, our store did not carry them. Luckily, they had the “Quiet” style in a different fabric so I could try them on. Perfection! A couple of phone calls and a swipe of my credit card later and my wedding shoes were on their way to Minneapolis. After waiting fourteen years, I finally purchased my first pair of Jimmy Choo’s! It was the longest six days of my life, but finally, one afternoon a box showed up on my doorstep. I now have in my possession the most beautiful shoes I have ever laid eyes on and in a few short months I will wear them to happily ever after!